Comic practice Vmars p2

Trying to work out a comic style I can manage, so here's the first page with that. Hopefully expect a lot more of these in the next few months, just with a noticeable improvement.


Veronica Mars, from episode 14 of season 1. The panels have lil numbers on them to label the text bubbles, here's what they're saying:

Part 1 here: [link]

8 VERONICA:
What about the woman who saw her jump? It's been on every channel.

9 LOGAN:
[Quietly sarcastic]
Well, if she's on the TV, she must be telling the truth. But her credit cards were missing. I mean, doesn't that seem like... [voice shaking]

9.5
I don't know, a clue? You don't jump off a bridge with your platinum card.

10 VERONICA:
Logan, I-

11 LOGAN:
[Insistent]
I know my mother!

12 VERONICA:
Okay...

Logan lets out a big sigh and looks down at his hands. He is still carrying Lynn's lighter. Throughout this scene, Veronica speaks softly and sympathetically but with a view to trying to reason with him.

13 VERONICA:
I heard she left a note.

14 LOGAN:
Well, yeah, she wants people to think she's dead. But if she was going to really do the deed, it would be chardonnay and sleeping pills. [Smiles] You know, she wouldn't risk being found bug-eyed and bloated in some shrimp net.

15 VERONICA:
I'll see what I can find out.

Logan turns to go.

16 LOGAN:
You know I...

He pauses, framed in the doorway.

17 LOGAN:
I just need to know she's okay.