Comic practice Vmars p1

Trying to work out a comic style I can manage, so here's the first page with that. Hopefully expect a lot more of these in the next few months, just with a noticeable improvement.

Veronica Mars, from episode 14 of season 1. The panels have lil numbers on them to label the text bubbles, here's what they're saying:

1 VERONICA:
Logan, what are you doing here?

2 LOGAN:
I want you to find my mother.

3 LOGAN:
Relax, I'm not asking you to drag the lake. My mother didn't really kill herself.

4 VERONICA:
[Softly]
Come inside, okay?

Veronica steps back as Logan enters the apartment, his arms still wrapped around his body.

5 LOGAN:
Veronica, she's not dead.

6 VERONICA:
[Carefully]
What makes you think she's still alive?

7 LOGAN:
[Impatiently]
Why does everyone assume that she's not? I mean, there's no body.

Part 2: [link]